It is tightening words and make it more stronger as structure with lees words. see comments on the document under the name revise. the revision only for background literature review section starting on page 3. I would to have this section under 3 headings the first one to add is depression among young people which includes paragraphs( 1+2+3+4+5+6+7+8) and the second heading to add is Adversity which includes ( 9+11+12) and the third heading to add is resilience and social support or protective factors include paragraphs (13+ 14). Try to make these paragraphs stronger as scientific review which I think I did not. I included details about studies when I should not. for example mention a study findings and consisting with these finding other study mention that, also if other study in contrast have different results why that? could be study using different population or measure for that reason it is different. try to add supported articles to what I wrote already and unsupported. I will attach the articles that I used. You can see my hypotheses and diagram ( Model to test) on page 13 which will give you an idea to revise and make it like a story. For example under the Adversity heading you can start with childhood adversity and what its effect and what make young people and adults vulnerable to have depression or dissociation and say some of those with childhood adversity will have depression and or dissociation with support of literature. so organize it as you see in a scientific way.
The last paragraph 15 is about the contribution of this study to the existing knowledge try to make it stronger and where it stands in the literature.
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